After all the feedback I received on my third draft, I decided to take these comments on board to make my final moving image product. Some peers told me I needed to edit to the beat more so I have changed some shots that were too long and edited them so they cut to the beat. I also took on the other comments from my peers about incorporating black and white scenes in my product so they would link in with my ancillary texts more. I decided to turn 'flashback' scenes into black and white to indicate to the audience that these scenes are in fact memories. Overall, I feel as though I have created a professional and realistic product which links to both of my ancillary texts really well.
